Prison break/And some other story ..

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Once Upon a time on a windy day with the flowers flying upon my face while I was walking I saw the deadly Cyclops who made me piss on myself From The Fear so I ran with all of my power through the mystic Isles where I found the great Cyclops Smith which then started to follow me with the Deadly Cyclops so I ran to the the Drake's Town and went on running till I got to the depot Where I have rested in peace..

That was a random story..
Hope you liked it
More will come soon..

mhm.... Try to add english-grammar stuff. I can't understand the most of your story, coz the whole thing is just 1 sentence for me.

Yea alright ill do the ":., and all .. ill try to improve

Its hard to read without

Code:

, : " etc

+ IMO its not such a good story

Hello and welcome to my movie story : Prison Break ( Season 1 )
Ill do them episode by episode ..

Episode 1.

A guy named "Lincoln Schofield" was trying to help his brother get some money because they're parents died.
So he payed all his money
for his brothers education and for colleague. ( Brother name "Micheal Schofield )
So he had to get some money because his money was not enough so he borrowed money.
Then he couldn't get the money back so he tried to steal some money for a guy called "Terrence Steadman" But they set him up with a trap.
Trap was to get "Lincoln Schofield" to go and kill "Terrence Steadman" but then when he went to his car at the garage he had a gun with him.
He went beside the car to kill "Terrence Steadman" But when he went to shoot him he found out the he was already murdered ( It's not Terrence but a guy just like him but Lincoln didn't know They changed his teeth so they don't figure it out).
So then "Lincoln Schofield" Ran away to his apartment.
While he went to his apartment a guy from the people who set up "Lincoln Schofield" so he cuffed "Lincoln Schofield" and took him to the police department.
He said that he saw him in his apartment washing his trousers and T-Shirt and that blood was all over them . ( Which is a lie )..

Lets go back to the part where "Lincoln Schofield" was in the garage..
There was a camera there and they were watching him ( The bad guys )
They had a computer freak which changed the video and made it as if "Lincoln Schofield" shot the guy in the car ( Which was supposed to be terrence but isn't. )
Then "Lincoln Schofield" Gets to prison..
End of Episode 1..Wait till I post the next episode the next day..Hope you liked it.

looks nice^^ i don't follow the movie but my friends like it

OoO,
Thanks

ahaa
so u combined both threads
Nice