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PostSubject: after I saw a tutorial..   Fri Apr 25, 2008 7:20 am

This is a mountain I made after I saw a tutorial.. ( Still I'm beginner )

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PostSubject: Re: after I saw a tutorial..   Fri Apr 25, 2008 7:25 am

And still too squary I think, try to add some nature in the mountain, some stones, other grounds, things like this.
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PostSubject: Re: after I saw a tutorial..   Fri Apr 25, 2008 7:32 am

Sure ok ( Critism needed ) im still a begginner ..
I'm trying to learn Very Happy thanks for tip
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PostSubject: Re: after I saw a tutorial..   Fri Apr 25, 2008 9:05 am

The nature outside the mountain seems okay
Well.. the rest i agree with skip

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PostSubject: Re: after I saw a tutorial..   Fri Apr 25, 2008 9:13 am

Sry xD SUCKS Very Happy omg looks like RME and screen'd whit simone's mapeditor xD

the mountain have bugs... use more other grounds.. like Dirt

and your map titel "pro" thats no Pro[mapping] ;O

sry...
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PostSubject: Re: after I saw a tutorial..   Fri Apr 25, 2008 9:27 am

Try not to flame that much every1... it's really annoying.
If you want to comment, place a nice comment and maybe some tips and stuff...
Flamming leads nowhere...

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@bleach
Well, it looks a lot better than the old one... keep taking a look at tutorials and try not to make it so squary...

C ya

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PostSubject: Re: after I saw a tutorial..   Fri Apr 25, 2008 11:11 am

Ok,
Thanks for the tip bruce ill try to make it not squary Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: after I saw a tutorial..   Fri Apr 25, 2008 11:22 am

To squary
But the nature is nice
also try to detaill the mountain inside
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PostSubject: Re: after I saw a tutorial..   Fri Apr 25, 2008 1:29 pm

Good improvement,
The mountain is far from good (the shape).
The nature is nice, use some grass puffs!

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PostSubject: Re: after I saw a tutorial..   Sat Apr 26, 2008 3:20 am

well here it is with more nature and stuff hope u like it Very Happy
And I have a question
Is the waterfall correct or wrong??

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PostSubject: Re: after I saw a tutorial..   Sat Apr 26, 2008 3:41 am

Again an improvement,
The waterfall must be there in stead of the mountain, not in front.
(hope you understand me, cuz I don't know how to say Razz )

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PostSubject: Re: after I saw a tutorial..   Sat Apr 26, 2008 3:51 am

well I didn't understand u...
U mean that I remove mountain and just put a waterfall??
or u mean I should put the waterfall another place??
or I should remove the waterfall??
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PostSubject: Re: after I saw a tutorial..   Sat Apr 26, 2008 5:06 am

I dont like the detailling inside mountain
Use small stones, gravel , rubble etc
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PostSubject: Re: after I saw a tutorial..   Sat Apr 26, 2008 5:57 am

okay,
Thanks for all tips Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: after I saw a tutorial..   Wed May 07, 2008 10:02 am

I'm about to give you the MAIN tip within mapping.

[whisper] Think realistic. [/whisper]

I didn't ever see a mountain with 100% horizontal nor vertical walls. And, if I were you I'd put some rock ground by the edges and in small areas around mountains.

And the waterfall should be on the mountain, so remove the Mountain borders and replace them with the waterfall
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PostSubject: Re: after I saw a tutorial..   Tue May 13, 2008 2:22 pm

Hehe, liked the name of the map Very Happy

Still need think more realistic, what that water plant is doing on the ground? :O
But was a big step from the other to this one ^^
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